Introduction:Begin with impressive examples which describe gun cause big damage on people. End with a thesis statement
Supporting idea
Thesis statement: gun is able to cause damage on many areas of life.
#1 gun boosts the illegal behaviors such as robbery and murder.
#2 guns is potential danger on campus
#3 terrorists with guns might make big scare and [...]
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gun control
November 29th, 2007 · No Comments
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journal#6
November 12th, 2007 · 4 Comments
To begin with, I want introduce a famous person, Bill Gates. As the richest man in the world, he is head of Microsoft which gives us a lot of amazing soft. However, people take delight in talking about his education background. He is a dropout student. Nevertheless, he can be successful without whole advanced education. [...]
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journal#5
October 30th, 2007 · No Comments
When it comes to the cigarette, different people have different attitudes on that. Some people seem it as an amazing pleasure since it can stimulate the nerve and make them feel good. Others have a huge antipathy to it because they hate the smell from cigarette and think it is unhealthy for body. There are [...]
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JOURNAL#4
October 28th, 2007 · 1 Comment
I got my first computer when I was 12-years-old. You can imagine how I was existed at that time. Although I can’t remember the first thing I did, I just known that I was watching the screen and moving the mouse for a long time.
Now, let me introduce my first friend. “She” has a white [...]
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my first essay[journal#3]
October 9th, 2007 · 1 Comment
Although it is not first time to write this kind of essay for me, I never write a paper that has more than 400 words. I spent really a lot of time to complete my first essay. In fact, I wrote it by several times. To begin with, since Steve required us to get [...]
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cause/effect essay
October 4th, 2007 · No Comments
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Instructor: Steve
Robert
“It is common in United States” this is the phrase from an American girl when we talk about her family structure. She is one of fifteen people at church, who participated in my survey on American family several weeks ago. Also, she told me that her boyfriend has the similar family background: that [...]
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rising divorce rate
September 27th, 2007 · 1 Comment
Introduction: Nowadays, there is reported that the divorced family is more and more common, even if half of family was ended with divorcing at some areas.
Cause#1: people fall in love quickly each other and so as get married. They find that there are some blocks between each other after the quickly marriage. So they would [...]
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journal #2
September 11th, 2007 · 1 Comment
1. Describe in detail one piece of writing that you have done in English. It could be a class assignment, a letter, a story, etc. Tell me the process that you used in writing it; in other words, how did you go about the task? Then tell me what you enjoyed about it and what [...]
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self-introduction[journal#1]
September 6th, 2007 · 1 Comment
My name is Liu Geng, from china. You can tell me Robert as well.
I was born in Fuyang, Anhui province, on January 18th, 1989. My mother told me that I was quite a lively boy during my childhood; I have few memories before I was 6 years old. The only impression is going to the [...]
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