come on, come here!

   Although it is not first time to write this kind of essay for me, I never write a paper that has more than 400 words. I spent really a lot of time to complete my first essay. In fact, I wrote it by several times. To begin with, since Steve required us to get an introduction that started from specific things to general ideas, moreover, the topic is too general to make some specific stories; thus, it spent me lot of time. Fortunately, I easily came up with three ideas which are coherent to my topic. However, every paragraph’s supporting details also was hard to come out. Finally, I finished my assignment that likes making up a robot. Although I got a poor score due to so many mistakes on my grammar and vocabulary, I was not disappointed by this; after all, I already known my shortcomings. If I could improve it, that will be better.