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rising divorce rate

September 27th, 2007 · 1 Comment
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Introduction: Nowadays, there is reported that the divorced family is more and more common, even if half of family was ended with divorcing at some areas. 

Cause#1: people fall in love quickly each other and so as get married. They find that there are some blocks between each other after the quickly marriage. So they would break out at once when they got brawl.  

Cause#2: the pressure from society and work is the most important reason to cause the rising divorce rate.   

Cause#3: more common family isn’t willing to have kids is one of the aspects.    

Transition paragraph: with the high divorce rate, society has focus on this phenomenon. They investigate lots of divorce family and indicate the effect of the rising divorced rate…  

Effect#1: their children will be growing up without the care from mother or father.  

Effect#2: less responsibility from family cause the some people’s irregular life habits.  

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1 response so far ↓

  • 1    kjkjroom // Sep 27, 2007 at 3:34 pm

    Is this 1paragraph?
    I think it is good structure.
    If you write essay on this topic, you will write good essay.

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